Yuriy Gavrilov @[email protected]

Act 1 Chapter 8

"THE BARGAIN"

Audioversion - https://drive.google.com/file/d/1lJfNogi-gmM-sdFbLq7jj2B1pZNc28JP/view?usp=sharing

I am sorry for lewding PRAGMATA like that... but I was compelled to...

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qWHKw1RIbpTLefSZDUY6bxQqd64xrZx9/view?usp=sharing

I also appreciate those who listen to it on MGTOW.TV.

I get no money for it, but at least I can see the viewcount - and I know it's watched by someone.

As i'm posting snippets of "Elion From Outer Space", I'd like to hear some feedback. I already posted the entire first act (there are 4 acts in total), and I'd like to know impressions.

Like what would you add/remove to the story so far? Can I improve the audioversion somehow? Should I use more music or less? Do you like me creating illustrations?

And most importantly - is Elion likable?

"My husband is the most precious man on this or any planet. There is nothing I wouldn’t do for him. And if you try to harm him in any way..."

Elion is the go-to waifu.

Act 2 Chapter 1

Audioversion

Act 2 Chapter 1

"THE GLACIER"

Watch/Listen to on MGTOW.TV -

https://www.mgtow.tv/watch/act-2-chapter-1_OdjTPXBOJ7jeq6j.html

Audioversion in the comments

She is married

Elion will get a job in Act 2 Chapter 1.

Or do you like sleek nostalgic 1980s?

I don't know - there's something sweet in the grimy 1980s aesthetic...

And yes - I have an uncensored version.

She's so happy the new chapter was released.

Act 1 Chapter 8

"THE BARGAIN"

Audioversion

https://disk.yandex.ru/d/FQQejIuKlwBBDA

Act 1 Chapter 8

"THE BARGAIN"

Watch/Listen to on MGTOW.TV -

https://www.mgtow.tv/watch/act-1-chapter-8_5YbXfW8JSH1RknE.html

Audioversion in the comments

I really like how this one turned-out

Meanwhile Elion pressures me to make Chapter 8 already... And I go: "I've got work to do - the one that pays me money!"

But she still insists.

Chapter 8 that will finish the first act of the book.