Life is beautiful,
But it's complicated,
We barely make it.
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@sim 16 syllables, you were so close. Line one is perfect, line two just needs one syllable. Separate it’s into it is and it’s 7. Line 3 is perfect. Really good haiku.

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@TenaciousGoat Thanks. It's a part of a song already so I can't take credit for it.
@TenaciousGoat Thanks. I'd be worried if I weren't humble. I like humbling experiences, they keep us grounded. The song itself is beautiful too. There is just something about it.
@TenaciousGoat I think it is Life is Beautiful by Vega 4. But having a bit of trouble confirming it.
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