Let's be fair, there is no law or requirement written anywhere that a webtoon artist should know about dramatic technique. Just the intention to create something is enough for that, and there's nothing wrong with it.
But the moment a studio invests big money into its anime production you should expect at least one educated guy to take a look at it and say ce nest pas possible. We need to cut and reorder things. But none of that happened, and we got lukewarm and underwhelming nonsense.