@RoninGrey I’m glad you liked the song, I actually wasn’t feeling that confident in this one and even open to suggestions and revisions as long as it’s constructive.

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@TenaciousGoat It's not really in a style that I often listen to but I did think maybe it felt a little short.

You could try adding another verse and / or a chorus or two at the end, or maybe a half verse before 2 choruses.

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