@RoninGrey My only suggestion bro is that the song needs more lyrics, the flow is great
though
Perhaps dig deeper into the Juliet concept. Like how Romeo and Juliet did a double suicide or use poison like your last love was a poison, brother you need some time etc
@RoninGrey Alright bro
@TenaciousGoat I'm just going to tell a story through the video of the type of guy this song is about.
But the idea you're talking about sounds like a good topic for a different song with a different message. I'll log it away and give you credit if I ever use it.