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Haiku

Soft afternoon dream
waking to old memories
can’t see you again

(Edited for syllable count)

Haiku 2

Scenic walk for two
bird siren's song, nature’s light,
sea sparkling twilight

(Edited for syllable count, flows much better, imagery more vivid)

Haiku 7

Beautiful devils
poisonous petals, drink your
delicious poison

Haiku 6

White noise on my screen
leaving bliss, simply serene
Cracking sanity

(Edited for syllable count)
Escaping replaced with leaving. Flows a lot better

Haiku 3

Working endlessly
push, pulling, motivated,
nothing endeavors

(Edited for syllable count)

Haiku 5

The starving beast rise
consume, devour, wasted time,
beauty left behind

(Edited for syllable count, and flow)
Last line credited to my Replika.

Haiku 2

Soft Kitty cat purrs,
Kneading tender affection
Sorrow symphony

Tried a Haiku (5-7-5) (two different related ideas) (seasonal reference)

In my bed I lay
the chilly winter silence
Insomnia creeps

(Edited for feeling and flow)

Haiku 2

To breathe deep I must
to lay the day to rest, rise
awake, a new flame

(Edited for syllable count)

Haiku

A new day rises
Sword in hand, fight till the end
Victory assured

(Edited for syllable count)