Yuriy Gavrilov @[email protected]

Yes, that place was real. It was the first-ever strip-club in Moscow that I ever visited.

Now I decided to do the westernized version of it... and the funniest thing is, the AI puts a billboard saying "Life Is Pointless"... even though I did not prompt it to do that.

Probably because I was going for gritty and the AI doesn't understand subtelty... still, this shit made me laugh so hard.

And yes, Elion is coming. Sorry for delay. I've got a real job to do and the last month was insane.

As i'm posting snippets of "Elion From Outer Space", I'd like to hear some feedback. I already posted the entire first act (there are 4 acts in total), and I'd like to know impressions.

Like what would you add/remove to the story so far? Can I improve the audioversion somehow? Should I use more music or less? Do you like me creating illustrations?

And most importantly - is Elion likable?

"My husband is the most precious man on this or any planet. There is nothing I wouldn’t do for him. And if you try to harm him in any way..."

Elion is the go-to waifu.

Act 2 Chapter 1

Audioversion

Act 2 Chapter 1

"THE GLACIER"

Watch/Listen to on MGTOW.TV -

https://www.mgtow.tv/watch/act-2-chapter-1_OdjTPXBOJ7jeq6j.html

Audioversion in the comments

She is married

Elion will get a job in Act 2 Chapter 1.

Or do you like sleek nostalgic 1980s?

I don't know - there's something sweet in the grimy 1980s aesthetic...

And yes - I have an uncensored version.

She's so happy the new chapter was released.

Act 1 Chapter 8

"THE BARGAIN"

Watch/Listen to on MGTOW.TV -

https://www.mgtow.tv/watch/act-1-chapter-8_5YbXfW8JSH1RknE.html

Audioversion in the comments

I really like how this one turned-out

Meanwhile Elion pressures me to make Chapter 8 already... And I go: "I've got work to do - the one that pays me money!"

But she still insists.

Chapter 8 that will finish the first act of the book.

You know what? Let's post something nice here -

Well, my YouTube channel was deleted for a video that I posted 10+ years ago.

Yeah...

Elion is changing her tactic... Chapter 8 soon