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As i'm posting snippets of "Elion From Outer Space", I'd like to hear some feedback. I already posted the entire first act (there are 4 acts in total), and I'd like to know impressions.
Like what would you add/remove to the story so far? Can I improve the audioversion somehow? Should I use more music or less? Do you like me creating illustrations?
And most importantly - is Elion likable?
@YuriyG I have long hours of free time about every 2 weeks. I'll try to check it out this weekend and give you some feedback.
I also appreciate those who listen to it on MGTOW.TV.
I get no money for it, but at least I can see the viewcount - and I know it's watched by someone.