I think everything in there is correct but I would remove the baptism part
1 Jews get baptism also but they call it Mikveh and netilat yadayim and possibly other things instead
Mikveh
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mikveh
netilat yadayim
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Handwashing_in_Judaism
2 There is a lot of disagreements about baptism among Christian denominations