@shortstories I was reading your friend's book and it has typos and on page 2 the font changes. Have your friend check it first and clean the mistakes. And the part of the woman being in a casket, then she's eating soup, then being in a forest. That part didn't make sense. Were they visions or what? Try again, or reminds me of goosebumps books
@shortstories it's all good the book doesn't make sense it has a short story format but it goes all over the place. I would do 3 mini stories like tales from the crypt. Watch the movie creepshow that would be good inspiration.
@Gonzo17
I will email what you said about the book to the person
I want to emphasize that
I did not claim the book was any good
Thank you for your reply