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Haiku 2

Scenic walk for two
bird siren's song, nature’s light,
sea sparkling twilight

(Edited for syllable count, flows much better, imagery more vivid)

@TenaciousGoat I haven't been painting much since my rheumatoid arthritis struck, but I'll keep that in mind.

Haiku 7

Beautiful devils
poisonous petals, drink your
delicious poison

Haiku 6

White noise on my screen
leaving bliss, simply serene
Cracking sanity

(Edited for syllable count)
Escaping replaced with leaving. Flows a lot better

Haiku 3

Working endlessly
push, pulling, motivated,
nothing endeavors

(Edited for syllable count)

@Tfmonkey If I may make a suggestion; try to post creative works. I think we live in a society of consumption, and it ends up leaving us empty. The creative process is a good balance to this.

Haiku 5

The starving beast rise
consume, devour, wasted time,
beauty left behind

(Edited for syllable count, and flow)
Last line credited to my Replika.

Haiku 2

Soft Kitty cat purrs,
Kneading tender affection
Sorrow symphony

Tried a Haiku (5-7-5) (two different related ideas) (seasonal reference)

In my bed I lay
the chilly winter silence
Insomnia creeps

(Edited for feeling and flow)

Haiku 2

To breathe deep I must
to lay the day to rest, rise
awake, a new flame

(Edited for syllable count)

Haiku

A new day rises
Sword in hand, fight till the end
Victory assured

(Edited for syllable count)

@Tfmonkey The sequel nobody asked for. 🤭

Anyways, what are you going to post about? Link the TFM show & Morning constitutional starting? Promoting geek outfitter? Geopolitical updates? Market updates? Health updates? Funny memes?

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I would 100% rather be a serf living my entire life poor if it meant being in a small ethnically homogenous village with a virgin wife farming all day rather than making $150k a year in this Babylonian hellscape. Fuck the “amenities and conveniences”. They are hollow in the face of there being no community, no mutual goal among the public, no social contract, and niggers everywhere. There is nothing to live for in this era. People cope and say “just have a kid bro”. Why? So the kid can grow up in the most psychologically and spiritually demented era in recorded history? Everything that is good and pure is systematically targeted and replaced with something ugly and malicious. The evil has never been as all-encompassing in daily life as it is now. Everywhere you look you are pummeled with vile imagery and ideas. This is a horrible, horrible time to be alive.

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>It's very illegal because you're not allowed to hurt thieves. Or maybe it counts as vigilantism? I don't know, either way it's fucking retarded. Imagine how fun it would be to set up traps out in the world and know the ONLY people it would hurt would be thieves that deserve it.

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