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@shortstories it's all good the book doesn't make sense it has a short story format but it goes all over the place. I would do 3 mini stories like tales from the crypt. Watch the movie creepshow that would be good inspiration.

@shortstories I was reading your friend's book and it has typos and on page 2 the font changes. Have your friend check it first and clean the mistakes. And the part of the woman being in a casket, then she's eating soup, then being in a forest. That part didn't make sense. Were they visions or what? Try again, or reminds me of goosebumps books

@shortstories true on mgtow.tv 2 people were talking shit to me. One banned me even though he talked to me first. The second was just a retard. People think it's easy to make content. But I still endure.

@shortstories I see a typo already. He should proofread it first. I'll read it now it's now that long just 54 pages. "Emily got" should be 2 words.

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