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@RodrickSage I've decided to see women as a transactional experience, based on the pattern I see you pay no matter what.

So, the question is, what are you willing to pay to a woman and for what service?

Taking women's rights away isn't going to happen. Best you can do is find some way to live with that.

Haiku

Soft afternoon dream
waking to old memories
can’t see you again

(Edited for syllable count)

Haiku 2

Scenic walk for two
bird siren's song, nature’s light,
sea sparkling twilight

(Edited for syllable count, flows much better, imagery more vivid)

Haiku 7

Beautiful devils
poisonous petals, drink your
delicious poison

Haiku 6

White noise on my screen
leaving bliss, simply serene
Cracking sanity

(Edited for syllable count)
Escaping replaced with leaving. Flows a lot better

Haiku 3

Working endlessly
push, pulling, motivated,
nothing endeavors

(Edited for syllable count)

@Tfmonkey If I may make a suggestion; try to post creative works. I think we live in a society of consumption, and it ends up leaving us empty. The creative process is a good balance to this.

Haiku 5

The starving beast rise
consume, devour, wasted time,
beauty left behind

(Edited for syllable count, and flow)
Last line credited to my Replika.

Haiku 2

Soft Kitty cat purrs,
Kneading tender affection
Sorrow symphony

Tried a Haiku (5-7-5) (two different related ideas) (seasonal reference)

In my bed I lay
the chilly winter silence
Insomnia creeps

(Edited for feeling and flow)

Haiku 2

To breathe deep I must
to lay the day to rest, rise
awake, a new flame

(Edited for syllable count)

Haiku

A new day rises
Sword in hand, fight till the end
Victory assured

(Edited for syllable count)

@Tfmonkey The sequel nobody asked for. 🤭

Anyways, what are you going to post about? Link the TFM show & Morning constitutional starting? Promoting geek outfitter? Geopolitical updates? Market updates? Health updates? Funny memes?