As i'm posting snippets of "Elion From Outer Space", I'd like to hear some feedback. I already posted the entire first act (there are 4 acts in total), and I'd like to know impressions.
Like what would you add/remove to the story so far? Can I improve the audioversion somehow? Should I use more music or less? Do you like me creating illustrations?
And most importantly - is Elion likable?
"My husband is the most precious man on this or any planet. There is nothing I wouldn’t do for him. And if you try to harm him in any way..."
Elion is the go-to waifu.
Act 2 Chapter 1
"THE GLACIER"
Watch/Listen to on MGTOW.TV -
https://www.mgtow.tv/watch/act-2-chapter-1_OdjTPXBOJ7jeq6j.html
Audioversion in the comments
@TenaciousWolf Elion is not a human being 😉.
@Tfmonkey
So if you travel through this portal and stay in 1958 to live - you will become a boomer of all boomers.
Even if you know what's coming, by the time Nixon is running for the office you will vote for him. And you will feel entitled for everything (I suffered the 2020s, so this is my payback).
After living through 1960s, you will become the boomerest boomer who ever boomered.
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@Tfmonkey There's a book by Stephen King "11.22.63".
Long story short - imagine a time portal that can take you to June 1st 1958 18:30 GMT-6. You can always go back to your time, but when you cross that portal again - it's always June 1st 1958 18:30 GMT-6 and you're rebooting the timeline. So you can steal money, run through that portal and then come back, the timeline is rebooted, but now you have the additional 1950s money on you.
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@TenaciousWolf You'll see 😁
@Tfmonkey FYI
Vitamin D is basically a substance extracted from sheep's wool and synthesized with ultraviolet to mimic the secosteroids in your skin.
I don't know - there's something sweet in the grimy 1980s aesthetic...
@RoninGrey When white kids try to mimic black kids with "GYATT" or "Rizz".
@RoninGrey I would like to do more illustrations as the story progresses. Including erotic imagery.
And Elion is true to her word - she is always horny and there will be lots of sex.
@RoninGrey It is unpredictable - that's part of it's charm.
@RoninGrey In this case - https://perchance.org/ai-drawing-generator
It does have it's perks... BUT
It is clunky, can't follow descriptions much, can't do letters or edit photos and 90% of it's output looks like scenes from Brian Yuznas "Society" (see the screenshot - but imagine a more nightmare 18+ version of it)...
You've been warned. I am not responsible for the nightmare fuel it produces.
@RoninGrey Would you like unsensored version? Cause I don't want to send you unsolicited 18+ pics...
Just another Russian bastard who likes art
Joined Dec 2025
